I liked this!
-It needs a preloader. I had no idea if it was loaded. Also, the graphics were fuzzy all the way through.
-I love how you parodied simple observations, comedians spend years mastering that technique. I'm sure you made more than a few of your instructors laugh with this.
How much action scripting did you use in this? I can tell a lot of time was spent on this, and it was time well spent.